"a killer twist at the end." Cheers Anita! Welcome to the club. Oh, I better not say that too loud. Some folks already think the FOM program is too elitist. I sure ain't one of them, and you're welcome to locate my list of all FOM related stories I've shared, to see if they can assist you in any way. As for your current WIP - you go girl! The great news is, you can write and share not only the story itself, but any and everything about the whole process. Do it right here on Medium, in plain view. That way you don't have to re-direct your focus, PLUS, you can start earning more for your stories. Good luck. By the way - The Unexpected Arrival is an awesome title. I'm about to start giving it a read :-)