Justiss Goode [REBOOTED]
1 min readJul 15, 2021

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Hi Marie, Just like Maria (below me) I don't like giving negative feedback either, however I don't have a problem giving constructive feedback when asked, and you did. I'm sensing this Pub is for muddy humor, like it says, but maybe this is too muddied. If you want to make it joking, I'd be more inclined to snicker if I weren't trying to digest so much "real sh*t - because let's face it, it's a serious issue. On the other hand, I'd be more inclined to pay attention to the facts if I weren't trying to get the humor that you have to work extra hard at, because it's such a weighty subject. You get me? That's just my take, but I liked the humor and the factual stuff, only in this instance both were too extreme to go together. I hope that make sense; at least it did in my head :-)

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Justiss Goode [REBOOTED]
Justiss Goode [REBOOTED]

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