"Nah, I suck at this! I fail at this in general; if I have something to say, it will be said longly, and the point will get lost in all the words. I’m working on it." If this seems to be the problem, the solution is getting used to writing short form stories. EVERYONE who follows me, knows how darn long-winded I am, even when commenting. The past few weeks, I've been writing short form stories of 150 word for my DAILY JUSTISS publication (since Short Form is always so tied up and trying to publish a gazillion other writers). It was hard at first, but now I LOVE it and I'm much better at it too. Give it a try for a few days :-)