"talking in impersonal and grandiose generalities" Oh, I hate to read a story with a great headline, only to find a robotic voice behind the general and clearly obvious statements they make. I feel like such a sucker. This was a great way to demonstrate the showing versus telling aspect in our stories Lucinda. Thanks you guys - or gals, or whatever (No offense - I'm 66 and still figuring out what's politically correct these days).