"There comes a point in every revision process where you need to switch from writer to reader." Spendid work on this guys, and I especially appreciate the point about giving it some space. Usually, by the time I'm done working on a story, I just want to be done and move on, but that's not always the best course of action. I know it, but I don't always respond in kind. Now, I'll be more conscious of this. We appreciate you all :-)